Agenda Adjustments Based on Informal Assessment
- You are accountable for all work assigned in this class. Please remember that your poetry writing exercises do not need to be perfect, but an attempt at the assignments should be evident.
- Please turn in your poetry writing exercises (from the book.) We will make a separate pile- do not put in your portfolios.
- Label and date every assignment so I know that you completed the assignments given.
- Write a 2-3 paragraph reaction to Collins and post as a response to today's post. This will be a grade, so if you haven't read, do this for homework. I would also appreciate it if you read the posts, so that you can learn from one another. Remember this is a collaborative workshop class.
- We will save the exercises posted here for class on Wednesday.
HOMEWORK: Get caught up. Try one other chapter from your text- your choice this time. I will not assign additional reading in hopes that everyone can get on the same page (literally).
Agenda
1. Word of the Week/Poem
2. Collins Discussion3. Poetry Writing Exercises
4. Workshop time
*YOU MUST WORKSHOP WITH SOMEONE NEW. If you have been working with one other person, you could merge with another pair...
*The goal: You must have workshopped with everyone in the class by the end of the marking period.
| Poetry Writing
Exercises from The Poetry Resource Page www.poetryresourcepage.com/teach/pex.html |
| WRITING EXERCISES: POETRY |
Alliteration Exercise Make a list of twenty phrases that use alliteration, such as the sun settled on the south hill with sudden color. Pick two or three of these phrases and try to build images around them. Use at least one of these images in a poem. Body Exercise Make a list of fifteen physical experiences that you’ve had, such as falling out of a tree, riding a roller coaster, or jumping on a trampoline. Choose one from your list and use images to create a lyric poem about the experience. (by Jay Klokker, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Body Part Exercise Write a poem addressed to a particular body part. Make sure you maintain a consistent tone and focus. Childhood Exercise Try to remember everything you can about a particular event that occurred when you were a child. In can be any type of experience, now matter how insignificant. Make a list of all the details you can remember. Once you’ve finished your list, build a narrative poem around it. Keep in mind that you don’t have to be faithful to the past. You can change details, descriptions, or actions if the change will make the poem work better. Circular Poem Write a short poem that begins and ends with the same line. The reader should feel differently about the line the second time around because of what has happened in the poem. Confession Exercise Write a poem in which you confess to a crime you didn’t commit. You can create the circumstances – perhaps you’re talking to a priest, or you’re being interrogated by police. Turn your confession into a narrative poem in which you describe the events leading up to your crime. Construction Exercise Write a poem in which you literally build or take apart something for the reader. Describe each step of the process for the reader, incorporating technical terms and descriptions of materials. Create a lyric or narrative poem that “shows” the reader how it’s done. (by Deborah Digges, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Crime Exercise Write a “confession” poem detailing an emotional crime and how you committed it. ORWrite a poem in the voice of a murderer. Make the reader sympathetic to the murderer. Death Exercise Freewrite about the first experience with death you can remember, whether it involved a person or an animal. Then freewrite about your most recent experience with death. Combine the details, memories, and images from the two into a lyric or narrative poem. Dream Exercise Many people have recurring dreams – of flying, of being chased, of being in a particular location or situation. Write a poem about such a dream that uses repetition to capture its obsessive nature. Try to repeat fragments rather than simply initial words or complete sentences; let the repetition interrupt the flow of the dream-story. Dying Exercise Write a poem in which you speak after your own death. In it, describe what death looks and feels like. Describe how it feels to be conscious at the time of death, what your emotions are. Give advice to the living about how they should face death. Elegy Exercise Using the third person, write an elegy poem for yourself, imaging that you’ve just died at the age of ninety. Include a description of yourself, and things that you would like to be remembered for/by. You may want to include places you’ve been, inventions you’ve created, famous people you’ve met, your talent for singing or dancing or cooking, your favorite book or movie or color, where you had your first kiss, what you did for a living, how many times you were married, how many children you had, all the states or countries you’ve lived in, etc. Endless Exercise Write a poem of about thirty lines that consists of a single sentence. Experiment with clauses and phrases and parallel structure. Try to keep the sentence moving forward, enjambing it across lines in different ways, while making sure it is grammatically correct. This type of exercise will help you develop flexibility as a writer, teaching you new ways to phrase things and new ways to play with the syntax of a line. (by Richard Jackson, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Erotic Exercise Brainstorm a list of everyday activities, such as washing the dishes, chopping vegetables, mowing the lawn, going grocery shopping, etc. Choose one and describe it in precise detail, focusing on every action it requires, all the little sensory moments involved. Take all of these details and images and use them to write a lyric poem in which you make some everyday experience sound erotic. ORChoose a landscape to describe. It can be any kind of landscape, but try something nontraditional – a junkyard or an empty parking lot. Use your descriptions and images to write a lyric poem in which you make the landscape seem erotic. Good and Evil Exercise The traditional imagery for good and evil is light and dark, white and black. Brainstorm a list of images called up by the two opposites. Then write a poem that reverses traditional expectations. In other words, write a poem about what is beautiful or inspiring about the dark, or a poem about what is awful or terrifying about the daylight. Fairy Tale Exercise Write a lyric poem in which you adopt the persona of a character from a fairy tale. For example, you could describe the way Snow White feels while she sleeps inside her coffin, or how the Prince feels as he holds Cinderella’s glass slipper in his hand. False Memory Exercise Write a poem in which you “remember” something that never happened. Use strong sensory images to convince the reader it really happened. Family Exercise Write a poem in which you adopt the persona of a parent or grandparent. Write the poem in the form of a letter addressed to your significant other. Describe your feelings for this person, the way they look and smell, memories that you have of them, where or how you met, etc. Fear Exercise Think of something you were afraid of as a child. Write a poem in which you describe what it was and how it made you feel. You can write from the point of view of an older person looking back on it, or you can write from the point of view of the child you once were. Field Guide Exercise Read the descriptions in a book of natural history or a field guide, such as a guide to birds, mushrooms, or wildflowers. Write a poem about a plant, bird, rock, animal, or fish from the book. Incorporate information from the book in the poem to help the reader identify your subject. First Line Exercise Take one line from a poem of your own that is unfinished or a poem by another poet. It does not matter where the line occurs in the poem, but you want to select the best line from the poem. Use this line as the first line of a new poem. Try to maintain the same quality of sound, language and thought that the first line presents. (by Stephen Dunn, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Foreign Objects Exercise Many poems arise out of everyday life – something you may have walked or driven by a hundred times and suddenly noticed for the first time. Part of learning to write poetry is learning to look around and observe both the ordinary and the unusual. Exercise: Spend half an hour walking around outside (on campus or in a parking lot, for example). Pay attention to the objects you see. Make a list of five “foreign objects” (such as a Band-aid stuck to a stop sign or a scarf hanging from a tree). Once you’ve made your list, try to imagine the story behind the object – how it ended up where you found it. Build a narrative poem around the object. ORDescribe the scene in great detail – the landscape surrounding the object, then the object itself. Build a lyric poem around the object. Function Exercise Choose one object in your room and make a list of all of the ways you could use it, or all of the things you could do with it. For example, a glass can be used to drink from, to pour from, to collect rain water, to turn upside town and catch a fly under, etc. Turn your list of functions into a lyric poem, using the object as the title. (by Jack Myers, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Gesture Exercise Spend twenty minutes observing people in a public place. Make a list of the gestures that people make, no matter how subtle. For example, the way a child twirls her hair around a finger, or the way a woman tucks loose strands of hair behind one ear. Choose one gesture and describe its motions in great detail. Build a poem around this moment and what you think it tells you about the person. God Exercise Write a poem to God. Make it a tirade, a complaint, a request. ORWrite a poem as God. Let God explain, refute, deny, defend. ORWrite a poem in which God is a traffic cop, a new anchor, a porn star, a grocery clerk. Hands-on Exercise Choose half a dozen small objects from around the house (like a fork, a toothbrush, or a stapler). Close your eyes and run your hands over each object. Write a description of what the object feels like, and how you think it looks. Use metaphor and simile to compare the feel or shape of the object to something else. When you have written descriptions for each of the objects, choose one to write a poem about. Describe the poem in such a way that a blind person could tell what it looks like. History Exercise The poet James Merrill wrote “we understand history through the family around the table.” Think about ways your own family’s story overlaps with the story of others – a historical event, an ethnic group, a social issue. Write a poem about someone in your family and how his or her story is related to history. (based on an exercise by David Wojahn, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Home Exercise Think about your childhood home, recalling the inside (hallways, rooms, closets, etc.) and the outside (the front yard, back yard, trees, swing sets, etc.). Focus on a place inside or out that was special to you. Describe the time you spent there, the things you did, the discoveries you made, the emotions you felt, why you went there, etc. Imitation Exercise Find a contemporary poem that you admire. Write a poem in which you imitate the style, tone, theme, sentence structure, etc. of the original poem. You may want to borrow the poem’s first line and use it to write a poem of your own. You may want to write on a similar topic – a childhood memory, describing an everyday object, providing a narrative for a photograph, etc. Inanimate Object Exercise Choose one inanimate object in your room. Describe what it looks like, and describe the room around it. When you’ve finished your descriptions, write a poem in which you adopt the persona of the inanimate object: what does it think, what does it feel, what does it look out at day after day after day, etc. Interior Monologue Exercise Write a poem in which you adopt the persona of someone famous (they can be dead or alive). Imagine this person sitting alone, looking out over the Grand Canyon at sunrise, reflecting on his or her life. Write a poem in which you convey this person’s character through his or her internal thoughts. Isolation Exercise Write a description pf one particular element of a set. For example, you can describe one book on a shelf, one face in a crowd, one bird on a telephone line, etc. Try to describe both the characteristics of the group/set, and to distinguish what makes the one member you’re focusing on different from the others. Turn your description into a lyric poem. (by Michael Pettit, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Landscape Exercise Go somewhere scenic – to a park or a lake, for example. Describe the landscape that surrounds you using sight, sound, smell, and tactile images. Build a lyric poem out of these images. ORGo somewhere urban – downtown Chicago or St. Louis, for example. Describe the landscape of the city using sight, sound, smell, and tactile images. Build a lyric poem out of these images. Letter Exercise Write a poem in the form of a letter to someone who is dead. In it, make a confession about something you did to them when they were still alive. ORWrite a poem in the form of a letter imagining that you are dead. In it, tell them something you meant to tell them while you were still alive. (based on an exercise by Robin Behn, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Life or Death Exercise Write a lyric poem in which you describe yourself being born. Describe what it feels like inside the birth canal, what it feels like as you push your way out, what you see, smell, hear or taste, etc. ORWrite a lyric poem in which you describe the moment of your death. Describe how you feel as you take your last breath. Describe the last thing you see, hear, touch, taste, smell or feel. Describe who is with you, where you’re at, etc. Metaphor Exercise Take something negative about yourself – an abstract concept, like fear, depression, hatred, loneliness, or cruelty – and find a concrete image for what it feels like. Maybe it feels like a weight pressing down on your, like walking down a dark street at night, or waking up in an abandoned house. Once you decide on a topic and an image, draw out the image in a lyric poem with the topic as your title. Newspaper Exercise Read the newspaper. Pick one story from the paper, and write a poem in which you take on the persona of someone involved in the story. Write a narrative poem in which you tell the story from that person’s point of view. (based on an exercise by Mary Swander, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Opening Lines Exercise Below are the opening lines from some short stories and novels. Pick one that interests you and see what kind of poem it generates:
Personals Exercise Write a persona poem in which you take on the personality of an older, single adult of the opposite gender. Write a poem in the form of a personals ad in which you describe yourself and your interests, and then describe the type of man or woman you would be interested in dating. Personification Exercise Look around your bedroom, kitchen, living room, or bathroom. Make a list of objects that seem to have moods or personalities. Choose five of them and create a description of each one’s personality or mood. Pick one of your descriptions and build a poem around it. Pet Exercise Write a persona poem from the point-of-view of your pet. Describe your environment, your day-to-day activities, the food you eat, where you sleep, where you use the restroom, the toys you play with, what you think about, the way your owner behaves, etc. Photograph Exercise Look through an old family album. Find a picture that you’re not in and write a lyric poem that describes the person and/or scene. ORLook through a book of historical photographs. Write a lyric or narrative poem based on the person and/or scene. Picturing Exercise Think of someone in your family, imagining them doing something they typically do – like, your mother gardening or your brother sketching pictures under a tree. Freeze them there in your mind in an “imaginary” photograph. Describe the photograph as if it were real, using the details to reveal something about this person’s character. Piece by Piece Exercise Write a poem in which you describe an object – not in its entirety – but piece by piece. Do not say what the object is. Let the individual parts explain the whole. Language Play Exercise Make a list of twenty phrases in which you use words as different parts of speech, such as he turned to me with a shadowing stare or her kisses purpled his flesh. Once you’ve made your list, choose one phrase to build a lyric or narrative poem around. Reflection Exercise Look at yourself in a mirror for as long as you can stand it. Describe yourself in as much detail as possible. Build a poem around your own reflection: the way your body changes over time, the small details of your face that no one notices, the reality of “facing” yourself, etc. Repulsion Exercise Make a list of things you find repulsive – the smell of garbage, fast food employees, people who never shut up, etc. Choose one and write a poem in which you describe that person, place or thing in such a way that it becomes beautiful. Sandwich Exercise Find a short lyric poem you really like and type it on your computer, leaving three blank lines between each line of the poem. Print it out. In the spaces between each line, fill in a new line of your own that seems like it would sound right following the line original line before it. Once you have filled in all the spaces with lines of your own, cross out all the typed lines from the original poem. Revise the poem using only the lines that you have written. (by J. D. McClatchy, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Scene Exercise Sit in one place for fifteen minutes and write down everything you observe about the place: sights, sounds, smells, feelings, colors, temperature, lighting, etc. Once you have a complete description, create a poem that develops a scene through a series of images. Scissors Exercise Take a poem that you’ve been working on but have been unable to get “to work.” Type it up, double-spaced, and print it out. Cut it into pieces – cutting so that phrases and chunks of sound or sense stay together. Throw away any extra parts, then take all of the “pieces” and try rearranging them in different orders. Add whatever you need, and keep moving things around until it “works.” (by Chase Twichell, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Secondhand Memory Exercise Talk with your parents or someone else who would know about your childhood. Try to find out something you didn’t know about yourself and then write about it as if you remembered it. Sexual Metaphor Exercise
Shame Exercise Write a poem about an experience that caused you to feel a sense of shame. Shape Exercise Sit in one room and make a list of descriptions of various objects and their shapes. Try to be as exact as possible, and to make the description of the different shapes distinct. Meditate on the shape and form of objects. Try to build a poem around one or the objects, a particular shape, or the idea of form. Suspense Exercise Write a poem in which you withhold the subject and verb for as long as possible; begin with a preposition or adverb, then pile up the phrases and clauses. Syllabic Exercise Write a poem that is composed of only one-syllable words, or a poem that alternates between one and two-syllable words. Voice Exercise Write a poem in which you take on the voice of one of the following:
Widow Exercise Write a poem in the voice of a widow whose husband has drowned. Invent any story you like about how this happened – he was a fisherman who was washed overboard in a storm or he was in a boat that capsized. Imagine that the widow, who now hates water, is forced to confront it due to circumstances beyond her control. Perhaps she goes to visit a friend who lives by a lake, or she must jump in a pool to save a child who has fallen in. Write a poem in which you adopt the persona of the widow. In her voice, describe what you see and feel as you look out at the water. (by Maura Stanton, from The Practice of Poetry, Robin Behn and Chase Twichell, eds.) Window Exercise Write a poem describing a scene outside your window. Do this even if your window faces a brick wall or a boring landscape; use your imagination to make it interesting. Word List Exercise Writing poetry teaches you to experience language in new ways, and the most important thing that you can do as a writer is to develop a relationship with words – to look at them individually, to learn how to see and hear and taste and feel the different textures of each word, and then to learn ways to weave words together into poems. Exercise: Make a list of twenty-five of the most beautiful/sensual/or poetic words you can think of. (For example, some of my favorite words are: obsidian, wisp, hollow, trickle, iridescent, and flicker.) If you can’t think of any off the top of your head, flip through the dictionary. Once you have your list of words, pick one to try to build a poem around. The word can be the title of your poem, part of an image, central to a narrative, or just a word in a line. |
Billy Collins' Sailing Alone Around the Room is full of poems, both old and new, that perfectly exemplify the authors style. Each piece takes a different part of the ordinary and makes it extraordinary through the guise of the author's mind. Billy Collins' writing is the premiere example of poetry that transforms the way the audience views each and every aspect of their lives. Billy Collins is the poet of the everyday person, something that is valued highly in the canon of American poetry. While some people read poetry to get a taste of the foreign and the elite, the poems of Billy Collins are for those who find beauty in the simple and the mundane. Poems that I had read before like Advice to Writers, Introduction to Poetry, and The History Teacher as well as poems that I had never read before like Dancing Towards Bethlehem, Tuesday, June 4, 1991, and Purity all read with the reliable warmth of a Billy Collins' writing.
ReplyDeleteI particularly liked the poem Purity. I find I learn most about writing from writers writing about writing. It is often the most intimate look into the writers process and their feelings about their own work. These poems also tend to be the most beautiful because the writers are writing about the thing that they have chosen to dedicate their life to. Billy Collins is no exception. Purity describes how he tries to strip himself down, body and mind, to try to find an unsullied place to write from. He experiments, pulling back layers like an onion, finding new voices and levels of intimacy on the page. He writes, "Finally I remove each of my organs and arrange them/on a small table near the window./I do not want to hear their ancient rhythms/when I am trying to tap out my own drumbeat." The stanza is beautiful, the imagery is alive with vivid ideas of how cumbersome it can be to be a human as well as an artist. We are bogged down by our memories, our experiences, or beliefs. Billy Collins talks about this by taking it a step further and saying he must strip out his organs in order to create from a place that is truly pure.
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ReplyDeleteBilly Collins’ poetry is easy to read. It’s like reading work written in laymen’s terms. They are poems about things I’m familiar with, but which are presented in a new light, from a new angle. I agree with Hannah, that Billy Collins' approach to poetry -- coming at it with simple subjects -- is comforting in a way, as if his work was a freshly baked (homemade) pie. It is what makes Billy Collins so approachable and welcoming. He also has a curious little wit and charm that is appealing to readers, like in "Bar Time", when he says ironically, "This makes us a rather advanced group, / doing our drinking in the unknown future" (14).
ReplyDeleteHe glorifies the everyday object. He makes a cigarette into a signal of progress, "Then I would be my own locomotive, / trailing behind me as I returned to work / little puffs of smoke, / indicators of progress, / signs of industry and thought" (55). Who would think to compare smoking a cigarette to the industrial revolution? Billy Collins, apparently.
Page 55: The Best Cigarette – This was the first poem I read from the Billy Collins book and I was instantly attracted to it. The poem is filled from top to bottom with really fun imagery and immediately provokes images in your mind. One of the most vivid comparisons is the smoke trail of the cigarette to the smoke stack of a train. He also combines this image with some allusion to the 1800’s, and how both trains and tobacco became extremely prevalent parts of society during this time. Lastly while I don’t smoke cigarettes I have activities that I enjoy while I’m writing that help inspire my writing process.
ReplyDeletePage 11: Earthling – This poem seemed to be about just enjoying who you are, and enjoying the earth we have to live on. It’s a common theme these days for people to either not appreciate themselves or the world they live in, not realizing that were here on this planet only due to the perfect conditions that allowed us to prosper, and that continuing on the path were going will only lead what we have to collapse. Why would you look for something else when you can make what you have already better by taking better care of it?
Page 4: Walking Across the Atlantic - In this poem Billy Collins does a really good job of blending imagination and real life, making running across the ocean in his mind feel as if he were really experiencing it. Once again he also does a really good job of blending in the imagery, giving you the view of the fish looking up at his feet as runs across the water.
‘I want the scissors to be sharp
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when you cut me out of my life
and paste me in the book you always carry.’
^ I love this by Billy Collins
Okay where do I begin? Well, since this isn't the first time I've been introduced to Billy Collins I think I kind of knew what to expect. Me, being a young writer, Collins serves as a kind of writing role model to me, especially in his style of writing poetry. He has this way of challenging his audience while connecting to them. It's almost odd but it's mostly beautiful. He has the ability to capture such large images in such simple poetry. A poem I really liked by Collins was Budapest. not only do I like the "short and sweet" nature of it, I really like the mood he sets while writing and the imagery he uses. His writing is very melodic and especially vivid whenever he is describing something.
I'm enjoying reading Billy Collins. This book contains plenty that I can learn from and a lot that I can connect to. For example, I really feel a connection with the ideas of A History of Weather. I often think about the infinite complexity of the world around us, especially considering the past and future as well as the present. A lot of times I examine the weather on a given day and really appreciate it deeply, even if it's not something that would be considered "good weather." I appreciate beautiful spring and summer days more than anything however, and recognize that in the history of earth, there have been billions of days like these. Billy Collins' poem describes similar ideas in a much different way than I would describe mine. The most apparent difference, for example, is that he connects these ideas to humanity more than I would. I might be able to improve my poetry by doing what he does, but not to the extent that I'm just imitating his style.
ReplyDeleteAnother thing that I like in a lot of Billy Collins' poetry that I could learn from but also doubt I'll end up using is how he personifies. In My Number for example he personifies Death, more through Death's actions rather than thoughts or feelings, although those are loosely implied. In Books, he personifies libraries and the texts of different writers contained within it.
Being previously introduced to Collins I still enjoy his selected poems. I’ve noticed how humorous, insightful, and even muted his collection of poems are. But I’ve also noticed how two sided Collins is because beneath the humor of his poems lies some deep insights into humanity as he changes from various tones. For example, the poem "Another Reason Why I Don't Keep A Gun in the House," starts out somewhat monotonous as he incorporates ordinary language and repetition, but before we know it Collins hits us with this midstream of humor. As the poem begins to die down Collins seems to universalize the poem a bit making an emotional observation about a famous musician. Collins uses this method tastefully as he pulls us through the poem creating a short, condensed story that evokes a range of emotions. Collins also uses simple language to convey complex ideas, which is why his poetry feels so accessible and relatable.
ReplyDeleteI knew pretty much what to expect from Billy Collins; his wit, the occasional dry humor, and all the poems about everyday things. I still liked reading him again, though. There have been a few poems I just don't get at all, where I read them and they kind of just glaze over me, but I've been enjoying most of it. I like the way that Collins uses sarcasm and dry humor. I think that some people might have problems trying to use dry humor, sometimes they have trouble making sure it's clearly meant to be funny. But Collins is very consistently clear about it, he's good at maintaining the dry humor without making it too dry. I also like the way he uses really simple things to talk about more complex subjects, I think it's tough to actually pull that off well.
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