Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Some Resources for Your Song Assignment

Process:
1. Select a song. It must fit the following criteria:
  • The song must have lyrics; no instrumentals.
  • The song must be school appropriate; check with me if you have questions.
  • Ideally, the song will have rich, diverse lyrics.
2. Use the resources below to find the lyrics of the song online.
3. Copy and paste or retype a copy of the lyrics into a word processor.
4. Print TWO copies of the lyrics. Save one copy and use the other for notes.
5. Analyze the lyrics for the presence of some/all of the following:
  • Imagery (note the sense being used)
  • Poetic devices (metaphor, simile, allusion, conceit, etc.)
  • Sound devices (alliteration, repetition, rhyme, etc.)
  • The experience communicated by the song
  • The mood communicated by the song
6. Write an essay covering the following:
  • What are the experience and mood of the song?
  • What imagery and devices are present?
  • How do the images and devices create the experience and mood?
7. Attach the 2nd copy of the lyrics to the end of your essay.

Resources:
(All of the following are collections of song lyrics online)
Lyrics.com
Getlyrics.com
Worldwide Internet Music Resources
Google.com
(Search for: "song name" "artist name" "lyrics")

Conclusion:
Now that you have analyzed your song lyrics, take some time to be aware of the poetry in the music you hear every day. The next time you turn on the radio, listen closely! You'll hear similes, metaphors, alliteration, and all of the devices we've been learning about during our unit. Imagine that!
Here are some good songs for analysis (lots of poetic devices). Check with me about your song choice.:

“Fire and Rain” – James Taylor
“Hey There Delilah” – Plain White T’s
“Ain’t No Sunshine” – Bill Withers
“Turn Turn Turn!” – The Byrds
“Einstein on the Beach” – Counting Crows
“I Say a Little Prayer” – Dionne Warwick
“Time” – Hootie and the Blowfish
“Carolina in my Mind” – James Taylor
“Love Song for No One” – John Mayer
“Highwayman” – The Highwaymen
“Brandy” – Looking Glass
“Walking in Memphis” – Mark Cohn
“In Your Eyes” – Peter Gabriel
“The Sound of Silence” – Simon and Garfunkel
“Come Sail Away” – Styx
“Aquarius/Let the Sunshine In” – The 5th Dimension
“Just the Way You Are” – Billy Joel
“We Didn’t Start the Fire” – Billy Joel
“Allentown” – Billy Joel
“Candle in the Wind” – Elton John
“More than a Feeling” – Boston
“My Way” – Elvis Pressley
“Don’t Stop” – Fleetwood Mac
“I Will Survive” – Gloria Gaynor
“Annie’s Song” – John Denver
“Ring of Fire” – Johnny Cash
“I Walk the Line” – Johnny Cash
“50 Ways to Leave Your Lover” – Paul Simon
“Every Rose Has Its Thorn” – Poison
“Scarborough Fair” – Simon and Garfunkel
“On the Road Again” – Willie Nelson
“Sweet Caroline” – Neil Diamond
“Tragedy” – Bee Gees
“Midnight Train to Georgia” – Gladys Knight
Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald” – Gordon Lightfoot

More instructions:

1. Listen to your song choice several times. Pay attention to the lyrics. Write them down and make notations if it helps. Try to read between the lines. Look for literary devices such as simile, metaphor and parallelism. These devices are often used in well-written song lyrics. Consult a literary device guide to help you understand these literary elements (see Resources).







  • 4
    Look for poetic devices and poetic structure, such as internal and other rhyme schemes found in poetry. Search the lyrics for hyperbole, symbolism and beautiful language you would be more inclined to find in the works of noted poets. You can find more about poetic devices by referring to a guide as you analyze your song (see Resources).




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    Discuss the music of your song in terms of tone, mood, and how it works with the song lyrics to enhance the overall message of the song. You don't need to be able to read music to hear what's going on musically within a song.




  • 2. Look for poetic devices and poetic structure, such as internal and other rhyme schemes found in poetry. Search the lyrics for hyperbole, symbolism and beautiful language you would be more inclined to find in the works of noted poets. You can find more about poetic devices by referring to a guide as you analyze your song (see Resources).

    3. Discuss the music of your song in terms of tone, mood, and how it works with the song lyrics to enhance the overall message of the song. You don't need to be able to read music to hear what's going on musically within a song.

    4. Look for poetic devices and poetic structure, such as internal and other rhyme schemes found in poetry. Search the lyrics for hyperbole, symbolism and beautiful language you would be more inclined to find in the works of noted poets. You can find more about poetic devices by referring to a guide as you analyze your song (see Resources).

    5. Discuss the music of your song in terms of tone, mood, and how it works with the song lyrics to enhance the overall message of the song. You don't need to be able to read music to hear what's going on musically within a song.
     

    The Sound of Poetry

    Song Analysis Assignment

    It is no secret that poets choose words not only for their meanings but also for the way they sound and make a person feel. Many consider song lyrics and music in general to be a a form of poetry. For this assignment you will analyze song lyrics as a form of poetry.  You will look for the use of the poetic and literary devices that you have learned in your creative writing classes. Along with this analysis, there will be a creative component to this project. I will allow you to work with a partner for this project, with the expectation that working with a partner will strengthen your final product.

    Some Guidelines

    ü  Choose a song that means something to you.  Be sure that it is a song that is appropriate for school (no vulgar or offensive language, or over-emphasis on violence or sexual themes).  Choose a song that contains poetic devices like the ones we have been discussing in class.  To earn the maximum points, you will have to be able to identify at least 6 poetic devices in your song.

    ü  Provide a copy of the lyrics.  You may download them from an Internet source, type them, or write them neatly in black or blue ink.  Be sure to include the songwriter’s name as well as the performer’s (or group’s) name.  Number the lines of the song.  You may number every 5th line (5, 10, 15…).
                       
    ü  Write an essay that addresses the following aspects of the song you chose.  The essay should focus on:

    1.    Choice—Identify the song and performer/composer. Why do you like this song?  Out of all the songs you listened to, what is it about this song that made you choose it for analysis?  Do you admire the performer?  Do you like other songs by the same performer? 
    2.    Meaning—What is the song’s deeper meaning (not just the surface meaning)?  What is the songwriter trying to tell the audience?  What is the author’s purpose for writing it?  Does the song tell a story?  Does it address certain emotions or issues?
    3.    Music and Lyrics—How does the instrumental music reinforce the meaning of the lyrics?  How does the music impact the overall tone or mood of the song?  Is it angry and loud?  Sad and subdued?  What instruments are used?  Why these instruments? 
    4.    Devices and Terms—What poetic devices are used within the lyrics? There are plenty to choose from! Some of the most common when discussing song lyrics are: similes, repetition, alliteration, etc. On the copy of the song lyrics underline, circle, or somehow note each device that is used.  In your essay, refer to each of the devices by naming the line number in which they appear.  Your goal is to find 6 of these poetic devices in the song you chose.

    When completed, this assignment will include a copy of the lyrics AND an essay analyzing the lyrics. As with any essay, pay attention to organization, word choice, presentation, etc.  

    We will discuss the creative component of this project in class when we go over the first part of the assignment. The rubric I will use to grade your song analysis is below. Check it out!

    Name: _______________________________________  Period:  ______ 

    Song Analysis Rubric

    Song Analyzed:  _______________________________________________




    10 points


    8 points

    6 points

     

    Choice


    Reason for choosing song
     is well-stated
    and thoroughly supported


    Reason for choosing song
    is stated and adequately supported

    Reason for choosing song can be inferred,
    but little or no support is given

     

    Meaning


    Song’s meaning is fully
    analyzed with in-depth
    probing of the literal and
    figurative interpretations


    Song’s meaning is fully
    analyzed with some
    discussion of literal
    and/or figurative
    interpretations

    Song’s meaning is
    analyzed on a
    superficial level

    Music
    and
    Lyrics

    The music’s relationship
    to the lyrics’ meaning is
    thoroughly analyzed

    The music’s relationship
    to the lyrics’ meaning
    is adequately analyzed


    The music’s relationship
    to the lyrics’ meaning
    is mentioned, but not
    analyzed

    Devices
    and
    Terms


    Six or more poetic
    devices/terms are
    correctly identified by
     line number and thoroughly explained


    At least four poetic
    devices/terms are
    correctly identified
    by line number and  adequately explained

    At least two poetic
    devices/terms are
    correctly identified
    by line number and explained


    5 points


    3 points

    1 point

     

    Conventions


    Few distracting errors

    Some distracting errors

    Many distracting errors

     

    Presentation


    Lyrics legible,
    text legible,
    neat-looking paper

    Either lyrics OR text
    need improvement
    in legibility or neatness

    Both lyrics AND text
    need improvement
    in legibility or neatness


    Points Earned:  __________/50 Points Possible = _________%

    Tuesday, December 1, 2015

    Sestina, Ghazal, Limerick, Tanka

    Here are some links that I found to help you write today's poetry forms. Please use the notes you took in class and the information provided below to write one of each form. Let me know if you have any questions!

    Sestina Rules
    Ghazal Rules
    Limerick Rules
    Tanka Rules

    Friday, November 20, 2015

    Portfolio Check

    I will collect portfolios on Tuesday. Here is the minimum I will look for:

    1. Random Connections Exercise
    2. Ode
    3. Elegy (as assigned by classmates)
    4. Sonnet
    5. Carpe Diem/Epitaph Exercise

    If I missed any major poem assignments please comment on the blog! Have a great weekend.

    Sonnet Info from the Izzy, Karlamarie and Xavier
    14 lines
    Lines are 10 syllables long
    The first quatrain-(four intermixed lines
     that alternatingly rhyme)
    The second quatrain-(four intermixed lines
     that alternatingly rhyme)
    The third quatrain-(four intermixed lines
     that alternatingly rhyme)
    The couplet- Two lines at the end that
     rhyme directly with each other)
     
    The rhyme scheme is abab/cdcd/efef/gg
     
    Use this info and prior knowledge to craft your poem please.
     
    *Note: Please start to think about your Scholastic entries!

    Thursday, November 12, 2015

    Poetry Forms Presentation

    For this assignment, you will present a poetry form to the class. You may work in pairs. Here are the guidelines:

    1. Research your poetry form
    2. Find a creative way to teach the class to write in that form.
    3. Your presentation should be short, but informative.
    4. Include the following:

    • A brief history
    • Information about the form
    • Contemporary context. How has the form changed over time?
    • An example of the form. Please choose at least one example from The Norton Anthology of Poetry.
    • Your own poem in the form provided.
    • Handouts are welcome, but not mandatory. If you have a complex form like the sestina, it may be useful to provided an organizer to the class (see me for assistance on this.)

      These are the forms we will look at!

      ode (done in class)
      elegy (Zoe/Tyshay)
      villanelle (Grace/Jacob/Mitchell)
      sestina (Jaymee/Aleah)
      pantoum (Mathilda/Austin)
      sonnet (Karlamarie/Izzi)
      haiku (Grace/Jacob/Mitchell)
      senryu (Grace/Jacob/Mitchell)

    Monday, November 9, 2015

    An Ode for Music


     
    An Ode for Music
     
    William Collins (1720–1759)
     
     
        WHEN Music, heavenly maid, was young,
        While yet in early Greece she sung,
        The Passions oft, to hear her shell,
        Throng’d around her magic cell
        Exulting, trembling, raging, fainting,        5
        Possest beyond the Muse’s painting,
        By turns they felt the glowing mind
        Disturb’d, delighted, raised, refined:
        ’Till once, ’tis said, when all were fired,
        Fill’d with fury, rapt, inspired,        10
        From the supporting myrtles round
        They snatch’d her instruments of sound,
        And, as they oft had heard apart
        Sweet lessons of her forceful art,
        Each, for Madness ruled the hour,        15
        Would prove his own expressive power.
     
    First Fear his hand, its skill to try,
      Amid the chords bewilder’d laid,
    And back recoil’d, he knew not why,
      E’en at the sound himself had made.        20
     
    Next Anger rush’d, his eyes on fire,
      In lightnings own’d his secret stings;
    In one rude clash he struck the lyre
      And swept with hurried hand the strings.
     
    With woeful measures wan Despair,        25
      Low sullen sounds, his grief beguiled;
    A solemn, strange, and mingled air,
      ’Twas sad by fits, by starts ’twas wild.
     
    But thou, O Hope, with eyes so fair,
      What was thy delighted measure?        30
    Still it whisper’d promised pleasure
      And bade the lovely scenes at distance hail!
    Still would her touch the strain prolong:
      And from the rocks, the woods, the vale
    She call’d on Echo still through all the song;        35
      And, where her sweetest theme she chose,
    A soft responsive voice was heard at every close;
      And Hope enchanted smiled, and waved her golden hair;—
     
    And longer had she sung:—but with a frown
        Revenge impatient rose:        40
    He threw his blood-stain’d sword in thunder down;
        And with a withering look
      The war-denouncing trumpet took
    And blew a blast so loud and dread,
    Were ne’er prophetic sounds so full of woe!        45
        And ever and anon he beat
        The doubling drum with furious heat;
    And, though sometimes, each dreary pause between,
        Dejected Pity at his side
        Her soul-subduing voice applied,        50
      Yet still he kept his wild unalter’d mien,
    While each strain’d ball of sight seem’d bursting from his head.
    Thy numbers, Jealousy, to nought were fix’d:
      Sad proof of thy distressful state!
    Of differing themes the veering song was mix’d;        55
      And now it courted Love, now raving call’d on Hate.
     
    With eyes up-raised, as one inspired,
    Pale Melancholy sat retired;
    And from her wild sequester’d seat,
    In notes by distance made more sweet,        60
    Pour’d through the mellow horn her pensive soul:
        And dashing soft from rocks around
        Bubbling runnels join’d the sound;
    Through glades and glooms the mingled measure stole,
      Or, o’er some haunted stream, with fond delay,        65
        Round an holy calm diffusing,
        Love of peace, and lonely musing,
      In hollow murmurs died away.
     
    But O! how alter’d was its sprightlier tone
    When Cheerfulness, a nymph of healthiest hue,        70
      Her bow across her shoulder flung,
      Her buskins gemm’d with morning dew,
    Blew an inspiring air, that dale and thicket rung,
      The hunter’s call to Faun and Dryad known!
    The oak-crown’d Sisters and their chaste-eyed Queen,        75
      Satyrs and Sylvan Boys, were seen
      Peeping from forth their alleys green:
    Brown Exercise rejoiced to hear;
      And Sport leapt up, and seized his beechen spear.
     
    Last came Joy’s ecstatic trial:        80
    He, with viny crown advancing,
      First to the lively pipe his hand addrest:
    But soon he saw the brisk awakening viol
      Whose sweet entrancing voice he loved the best:
    They would have thought who heard the strain        85
        They saw, in Tempe’s vale, her native maids
        Amidst the festal-sounding shades
    To some unwearied minstrel dancing;
    While, as his flying fingers kiss’d the strings,
      Love framed with Mirth a gay fantastic round:        90
      Loose were her tresses seen, her zone unbound;
      And he, amidst his frolic play,
      As if he would the charming air repay,
    Shook thousand odours from his dewy wings.
     
        O Music! sphere-descended maid,        95
        Friend of Pleasure, Wisdom’s aid!
        Why, goddess, why, to us denied,
        Lay’st thou thy ancient lyre aside?
        As in that loved Athenian bower
        You learn’d an all-commanding power,        100
        Thy mimic soul, O nymph endear’d!
        Can well recall what then it heard.
        Where is thy native simple heart
        Devote to Virtue, Fancy, Art?
        Arise, as in that elder time,        105
        Warm, energetic, chaste, sublime!
        Thy wonders, in that god-like age,
        Fill thy recording Sister’s page;—
        ’Tis said, and I believe the tale,
        Thy humblest reed could more prevail        110
        Had more of strength, diviner rage,
        Than all which charms this laggard age,
        E’en all at once together found
        Cecilia’s mingled world of sound:—
        O bid our vain endeavours cease:        115
        Revive the just designs of Greece:
        Return in all thy simple state!
        Confirm the tales her sons relate!

    The Ode

    Today we are discussing the ode. An ode is a poem of praise to anything. Here are some of the odes we looked at:


    1. Ode for Music
    2. Percy Bysshe Shelley: Ode to the West Wind
    3. John Keats: To Autumn
    4. Henry Timrod: Ode
    5. Henry Wadsworth Longfellow: The Fire of Driftwood
    6. Hart Crane: from The Bridge
    7. Marianne Moore: The Paper Nautilus
    8. Judith Wright: Australia 1970
    9. Charles Simic: Miracle Glass Co.
    10. Howard Nemerov: The Blue Swallows
    11. Robert Creeley: America
    12. Robert Pinsky: Ode to Meaning
    13. Joy Harjo: Perhaps the World Ends Here

    From its origins in classical antiquity, the ode was a solemn, heroic, and elevated form. It elevated the person, the object, the occasion. In ancient times, in the Pindaric ode, athletes were praised, statesmen were applauded. Therefore the early examples of the ode are full of flatteries, exaggerations, and claims for the excellence and high standing of the subject.


    The ode might have remained a static and historic form, but the Romantic movement galvanized it. Suddenly these poets, struggling with their new and volatile arrangements of the inner and outer world, discovered themselves in this form.


    In the nineteenth century, the ode transited from its old heroic mode and became a form that examined and exalted lyric crisis. In this form Keats celebrated the nightingale, the Grecian urn (remember that?) and the darkening weather of Autumn. In this form also, Shelley wrote his powerful "Ode to the West Wind."


    But the ode, like the pastoral and elegy, was part of convention, part of mode, and all opportunity. Modern poets have taken the spirit of the ode-- its address, its decorum-- and widened it to include a much more panoramic landscape of reference and celebration.


    In the nineteenth century, when Shelley wrote "ode to the West Wind" or Keats" To Autumn," two things are obvious: The ode is no longer a ceremonial form, and the writing of the sonnet has influenced the structure of the ode.  Shelley's "Ode to the West Wind is largely made of sonnets, but Wordsworth's defining "Ode on the Intimations of Immortality" is irregular, exuberant, shifting from long lines to short, and from epigrammatic to philosophical statements.


    For poets in this century, the ode was almost a lost form. Its straight-faced and unswerving elevation for objects and persons no longer seems possible in an age of lost faith and broken images. But, as in Robert Pinsky's dark and witty meditation on its power, the ode still casts a long shadow over the contemporary poet.

    Thursday, November 5, 2015

    Adam Fitzgerald Poem to Discuss/Random Connections Writing Exercise

    Poem with Accidental Memory
    By Adam Fitzgerald


    That we go back to life one day, the next,
    Some other century where we were alive,

    When music spelled itself out to us, often
    Incomplete, and nothing was more vague

    Than the banality of  whom to love and lose
    In line, the doppelgangers in rimless snow,

    Or even now, in summer, at day, by night,
    When something oblivious, replete, turns

    Back at us in idolatrous quiet, so we see
    Who in nullified particulars we really are

    At a desk of our own making, filling in for
    Someone else’s life sentence, blots drying

    On a silk tie having no meaning but today’s,
    When the loner puts his insomnia to rest.
    Share this text ...?

    Source: Poetry (January 2014).
     
     
     
    Random Connections Exercise
    Participants break into groups of two. Without consulting each other, one person should come up with a "Why?" The other should come up with a "because". Some of the links work beautifully. Others are bizarre, but they might work even more beautifully.

    Try the exercise with if/then and I used to/but now.

    Some examples:

    Why do I see the things in your eyes?
    Because the TV is on.

    Why do I have to grow up.
    Because you broke it.

    I used to be afraid of the dark,
    But now I can't see a thing.

    I used to fall in love at the drop of a pin,
    But now I sleep with my eyes open.